Oooh... I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
Actually, Rayne never was supposed to get shot, so I'm not sure where you got that ending from... That must be just a little error is the script but as if now, I still couldn't find what is the cause of it :v
Okay...This has become a reoccuring problem... I may or may not have made this chapter way to complex than it needs to be...but I don't blame any of you, I admire your spirits in trying to get all the endings of Sultan's chapter. Besides, who doesn't love this Rude-driven, harsh yet considerate, condescending and probably a little sadistic Lion?
I should have a devlog in explaining how to get all of Sultan's endings. If you're still interested, go and check it out! 👍
I think I got the best ending for Sultan but I like dunno how to get images 1, 3 and 4, but yeah this vn is like amazing didn't really expect the direction
Perhaps the ending you've got is the neutral ending, in which Sultan lets you go without knowing the true murderer and does not see any potential relationship between him and Rayne. Btw the card that he gives is NOT Sultan's farewell gift. Sultan's chapter has 4 endings in general, you can keep trying to get the other endings!
I actually believe Sultan when he said that the person that used to inhabit the the body in which Rayne is now killed his mom. Imagine if it was?? Ploet Twiste
The farewell sultan two illustrations of rayne, and those two illustrations have two different variants whether you were in Iris's costume or you were in your butler when the chapter ends
Hope this clears up why there are a lot of pages of the illustration in the batch :∆
I think there is a bug on the bad ending with sultan because when he missed his shot my screen turned completely black and go to the to be continued screen is this some kind of an ending?
I'm not sure how you all keep getting the issue, all the gadgets I tried did not encounter the same problem. To answer your question, the black screen is within the scripts yet it's not supposed to send you to the to be continued screen. I couldn't tell what was causing the problem and the elast I could do is advice you to try the rest of the endings (Besides, I'm pretty sure you go the bad ending anyways, there's like four different ways how Sultan sends you off)
I hope my essay could help you get some closure with Sultan's chapter!
What the flip man 😭. I didnt get anything. Sultan being a meany. I did the route where I would have his Mothers pin but I think an error occurred and I never got it.
Holy crap this was a very intense chapter and i love it, i love sultan, such great work i stayed up to 5 just to finish this just wow, wow one of the my best chapter i read... I hope Rayne and sultan meet again... I love sultan🥰 Rayne really just became the husband of sultan on that chapter...i hope Rayne still wear's the outfit i would love to see him still in that fem outfit... I love sultan... Husband and Wife...
I will give my forgiveness if you answer this question is katio a bf material or husband, the damage you had done to us is mere possible to give concent of forgiveness you may answer or not it's the choice that matters.
Oh Santa kas make this Christmas a wonderful day all i want for Christmasssssss~ issss~ a big cat that has a "k" as it's first letter of his name and ending with a "o" I don't care about the presents underneath the Christmas tree I just want him for my own, more than you could have ever known make my wish come trueeee~ all i want for Christmas issss himmm~ (im overExcariated)
I know he's kinda spoiled but aside from that, That bathroom scene bawled me out. like- AHAHEHAHEHEISKDJD okay anyway, you're welcome and yes I hope it improves :3
Bro I hate this update(Cus I am feeling the embarrassment of it from that first bit) Aside from the ungodly amounts of embarrassment I felt it was good
Sorry that it took so long, I've been up with my personal stuffs lately, and I plan to release c3 ep 3 and 4 along with ep 5 and 6; but if it'll be too long, I'll release the two earlier. Thanks for your patience! :D
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It's kinda refreshing to see the design for Ross because it's like Big bod small head.
Oooh...
I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
I LOVE THE GAME, i literally fell in love with everything
OHMAGADDD!!! REALLY??? WOW! I Appreciate the comment! I hope you're looking forward for chapter 4! 🥹🥹
I think the next one is going to be a dragon because of green just a huntch, it gives me dragon vibes.
OoOo...Dragons are cool...🤔
Is the visual has a 4th chapter?
Yes, chapter 4 is coming soon!
oh OHHHHHH i tought the story is finishe- wait ... nope there is a battle coming right?
Maybe? Who knows! :p
Man... I literally did one of the worst endings in chapter 3...
Atleast yours didn't actually died.
this is super good read. anyway bring kitoa back! pls!!! also i cant believe I feel for it, I though taylor was cuuuute😭😭😭
Girl same🥲
how are the endings going to work with future chapters
There is an ending where sultan actually shot Rayne i got that ending once😄.
Actually, Rayne never was supposed to get shot, so I'm not sure where you got that ending from... That must be just a little error is the script but as if now, I still couldn't find what is the cause of it :v
Well, I can't say much but I'll just say that they are just as important as the farewell gifts ;∆
Wow a bullet to the head ending that's a thoughtful farewell gift for sultan😄
I love the good ending thank you kas for telling me a hint😭😭😭
Even if they don't see each other i hope yo see something related to them.
I personally preferred the guilty ending
Can you give us tips on how to get the 1,3,4 ending?😭😭IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN OTHER ENDING
Okay...This has become a reoccuring problem... I may or may not have made this chapter way to complex than it needs to be...but I don't blame any of you, I admire your spirits in trying to get all the endings of Sultan's chapter. Besides, who doesn't love this Rude-driven, harsh yet considerate, condescending and probably a little sadistic Lion?
I should have a devlog in explaining how to get all of Sultan's endings. If you're still interested, go and check it out! 👍
SULTAAAN 😤😳
Question. The last 2 images in the gallery said of out 12 and out of 4. Are all of those unlockable?
Yes, but tbh not much changes in the art, just the most was face expressions and Rayne clothing options :v
Oooh. Rayne gets to look aesthetic 💅🏼
AKSJSKSJKSJSJS 😭😭😭
Yes. You go girl
I WANT TO MARRY SULTAAAN
Me too period.
Yas. You go girl. 💅🏼😝💝
I think I got the best ending for Sultan but I like dunno how to get images 1, 3 and 4, but yeah this vn is like amazing didn't really expect the direction
If sultan gave you something then it's the best ending.
yeye I got his thingy
Perhaps the ending you've got is the neutral ending, in which Sultan lets you go without knowing the true murderer and does not see any potential relationship between him and Rayne. Btw the card that he gives is NOT Sultan's farewell gift. Sultan's chapter has 4 endings in general, you can keep trying to get the other endings!
I actually believe Sultan when he said that the person that used to inhabit the the body in which Rayne is now killed his mom. Imagine if it was?? Ploet Twiste
uhhh I did get his insignia I like just saw that the insignia is 2 and that 1,3 and 4 cg from the same batch of "farewell sultan" is not unlocked
The farewell sultan two illustrations of rayne, and those two illustrations have two different variants whether you were in Iris's costume or you were in your butler when the chapter ends
Hope this clears up why there are a lot of pages of the illustration in the batch :∆
ahhh thx for the tip
I think there is a bug on the bad ending with sultan because when he missed his shot my screen turned completely black and go to the to be continued screen is this some kind of an ending?
I'm not sure how you all keep getting the issue, all the gadgets I tried did not encounter the same problem. To answer your question, the black screen is within the scripts yet it's not supposed to send you to the to be continued screen. I couldn't tell what was causing the problem and the elast I could do is advice you to try the rest of the endings (Besides, I'm pretty sure you go the bad ending anyways, there's like four different ways how Sultan sends you off)
I hope my essay could help you get some closure with Sultan's chapter!
Noooo sultan i.. I'm sorry i crying rn
No worries! Sultan will be fine...I think...
OMG This is the best game I have ever played
Thank you! Seeing a comment like yours truly fills my day with joy! :D
Omg... I think I am failing hard on this game...
Well, I'm honored that you think Rainbow is a complex game 😊
All I do is making MC getting screwed... in the bad sense
Damn. If only he gets screwed in a good way 😏😔
he needs any kind of action as soon as possible lol
Man I'm gonna miss Sultan a lot.
I cant do the "wait 3 seconds" thing in episode 6 😭😭
Wait until the bar is almost gone then click.
Thank you. Also, are we supposed to get an Item from Sultan?
Yes, u should :v
What the flip man 😭. I didnt get anything. Sultan being a meany. I did the route where I would have his Mothers pin but I think an error occurred and I never got it.
Oh ho ho ho! my friend, the mother's pin is NOT his gift neither is the card that he gives you.
Holy crap this was a very intense chapter and i love it, i love sultan, such great work i stayed up to 5 just to finish this just wow, wow one of the my best chapter i read... I hope Rayne and sultan meet again... I love sultan🥰 Rayne really just became the husband of sultan on that chapter...i hope Rayne still wear's the outfit i would love to see him still in that fem outfit... I love sultan... Husband and Wife...
Where's the update?
Sorry for the late reply... :/
(Psst...It's out now)
Yes! yes!
Valentine's with katio 🤭
Kas can we have a little information on when it will come out?
Hmm...Idk, 15th February? Does that work?
Yes yes
I will give my forgiveness if you answer this question is katio a bf material or husband, the damage you had done to us is mere possible to give concent of forgiveness you may answer or not it's the choice that matters.
Idk, both? He does look like he would be cut out for the job.
You've been forgiven from your wrong doing 😊
just finish what there is currently... amazing game!!! Please let Rayne meet love ;)
Thx! ✨✨✨ Glad that you enjoy the game! I hope you'll stay tune for the ending of chapter 3 and the next chapter :∆
Postponed....?? 😭😭😭 That's really devastating to know but yeah take your time 💔💔 (I miss my yellow lion)
The episodes are good, I promise :p
I do not listen to warning signs like 18+ it will not have any condenses
PLEASEEE wheres the update I NEEED those new chapters!
Sorry, the update's been postponed, I hope you could wait until the next update
Will there be something special on Christmas Day?
Hm...I Don't know where to put a christmas special... :0
maybe in the extras
Oh Santa kas make this Christmas a wonderful day all i want for Christmasssssss~ issss~ a big cat that has a "k" as it's first letter of his name and ending with a "o" I don't care about the presents underneath the Christmas tree I just want him for my own, more than you could have ever known make my wish come trueeee~ all i want for Christmas issss himmm~ (im overExcariated)
aksjsksjskjsjs That would be one heck of an episode 😂😂😂
Oh! Santa kas can you tell us about an upcoming update on the vn just a little peak oh! Santa kas.
Nyeh....It's something, I don't know if it's big or not, you guys will decide soon :/
Will we be seeing chapter 3 episode 5 and 6 before the end of the year or next year
presumably before the end of the year, which means chapter 4 will begin next year! :∆
Kas is katio bi, gay or straight🤭😳😶?!
That...I'm not sure...I guess it'll remain a mystery... :b
dang almost known I'll get to know it some way
Now i just keep wondering who's string is rayne attached too
You'll see 🫵✨
Is 3.4 the latest update?
Yes, the most recent one. Chapter 3 episode 3 and 4
Thx
Is there anything new?
Is there like a new update?
Not yet, but I get the feeling that the next update will arrive somewhere between this month or the next :v
This vn is frickin amazing ahhrhshshduusiskisn okay but Sultan tho-
Thank you! However, there's still some improving could be done :∆
What's up w Sultan? 👀
I know he's kinda spoiled but aside from that, That bathroom scene bawled me out. like- AHAHEHAHEHEISKDJD okay anyway, you're welcome and yes I hope it improves :3
Do you do furry vn content on tiktok?
Yepp!! Why'd you ask?
girl i know you!
This story has turned out so very differently than I had expected it to, and I absolutely love it~ 😋
Oh? Is it really that different than what you expected? Regardless, I'm glad you're still enjoying it :∆
Fully thought it'd be a happy-go-lucky slice of life romance, but I really like how deep it's become 😌
Do people actually thought it'll be a cutesy happy and adorable slice of life?...
Ouh, you have not seen the rest of the chapters... ÒwÓ
🙀
Bro I hate this update(Cus I am feeling the embarrassment of it from that first bit) Aside from the ungodly amounts of embarrassment I felt it was good
I apologise for Rayne, He just felt a bit silly that episode :P
I'm still waiting the update
Sorry that it took so long, I've been up with my personal stuffs lately, and I plan to release c3 ep 3 and 4 along with ep 5 and 6; but if it'll be too long, I'll release the two earlier. Thanks for your patience! :D
Question would there be different endings for the final chapter?
It's not for certain yet but...probably... :/