I NEED more of this game it is really good, this game feels like if i read a book but got to bash someone head in but im wondering something for the "friendly" endings for sultan when you say to "Obey Cameron until you've had enough on his last request" what does that mean you have to wait until the last option or just say no at any time?
im kind of confused by that tbh (and i kinda feel a bit dumb by asking that question lol)
I assuming that we surpose to have farewell gift after achieve good ending and it would display on our main menu (maybe it would follow the order of the rainbow).
I've alr get the good end with Ollie (i think so) and i think the farewell gift would be his 2nd place medal but I dont see it back the main menu.
Sooo can anyone help me with some guide to Best/ Good end in chapter 1 and 2
Oooh... I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
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Don't be greedy with the chapters.
I NEED more of this game it is really good, this game feels like if i read a book but got to bash someone head in but im wondering something for the "friendly" endings for sultan when you say to "Obey Cameron until you've had enough on his last request" what does that mean you have to wait until the last option or just say no at any time?
im kind of confused by that tbh (and i kinda feel a bit dumb by asking that question lol)
Yeah, the obey just meant "refuse until the last option" because its ridiculous.
Also, thanks so much! I'm happy to know my VN is capable to someone feel that way! I am honoured QwQ
okie thanks bc that could have saved me from a bad ending lol anyways I hope you are well and thank you for making the VN :)
omg, i need more of this, i played all the choices, i need it :3
Wow! You really went on a hunting spree with this one :0
Question and spoilers
I assuming that we surpose to have farewell gift after achieve good ending and it would display on our main menu (maybe it would follow the order of the rainbow).
I've alr get the good end with Ollie (i think so) and i think the farewell gift would be his 2nd place medal but I dont see it back the main menu.
Sooo can anyone help me with some guide to Best/ Good end in chapter 1 and 2
I got it!!!!
Happy for you! Be sure to sharpen your skills in decision-making, it's gonna get harder from there :∆
I can not wait for it!!!!
I can help you im a freak that plays it over and over.
It's kinda refreshing to see the design for Ross because it's like Big bod small head.
Oooh...
I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
I like comments that expressed their reactions well, like yours! It's very fun to read your review of my VN and it really gave me motivations to continue with the story!
I do agree that Ross's character was a bit lost during chapter 1 and chapter 2 because I was struggling to understand how he is as one of the casts. Ross was supposed to be a close and sympathetic friend but the undeveloped writings made it looked like he's more of a creep...so, let's hope that the revamp I made to certain situations involving Ross is more explained after the build 4.0 (certain dialogues were altered...)
Regardless, I'm happy that you're sticking with the VN after your first read! I promise to keep updating it as much as I could 😊✨👍
I LOVE THE GAME, i literally fell in love with everything
OHMAGADDD!!! REALLY??? WOW! I Appreciate the comment! I hope you're looking forward for chapter 4! 🥹🥹
I think the next one is going to be a dragon because of green just a huntch, it gives me dragon vibes.
OoOo...Dragons are cool...🤔