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The story still going?

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Yes, I'm just planning a big update before c3 😅

Ohhhh im hyper now the update 

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I hope the next update will be great🤑

Hello I'm a new reader and i love this visual novel it is very good well made the story is so good i just love this visual novel💖

I love this visual novel too😊

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NOW I UNDERSTAND WHY THE TITLE IS CALLED RAINBOW!


It's on the Chapters' Titles that are based fon the characters we've met.


First Ollie is Red,

Then Ross is Orange,

The it'll be Sultan cus he's Yellow


Damn I was yelling when thought of it.

Still I'm hooked and shook but it's lovely and good

PS: I predicted that Ross last episode will be sad but in the end I think it was a happy ending considering they talked it through in the night. Ross even gave his pin<3.

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Does it mean we have 4 more characters to meet? 🤔

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how DARE you.

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Wow! 👏👏👏 I thought I could keep it a secret until after Sultan's chapter lmao

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This build was so intense and dark holy shit! 😱

Is it dark?...I couldn't tell lmao 😅

Considering Rayne was sexually assaulted by his friend I think its safe to say it was.

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Excuse me, but the updates don't come to my feed list and i don't know if someone has the same issue, but i hope it can be fixed in the future.

I believe someone else has that problem too. Hm...It could've been your itch page or it could be my fault. I'll look into it, thank you! ✨

thanks to you Kas, i believe is a glitch about email or something relatable to that.

Did not expect a love triangle did not think all of it Ross did rayne bad did not expect that Ross inlove with Ollie shocker. now will Ross be inlove with rayne in the future?

Only time could tell! 🤭

i tihnk that we can start a shitpost from tumblr here about punctuation.

also; brr am cold

Yeah so true so truly

there will be an official discord server for that so no

Is there something wrong with how I write? Just asking...😅

nope
but on an unrelated topic
at 2 am i suffered from heat stroke i think
and vomited all the juices out of me

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not so jolly start to the day.

that is a  terrible way to start the day, hope u feel better tho ✨👌

Is the Ross scene the NSFW scene but on text

Technically, they didn't do anything...They didn't do the deed, just a little struggle and Rayne managed to escape regardless (with trauma)

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Why does it have to end. I love the ending looking at the view inside the train i really really like this chapter with katio but episode 5 and 6 is so entence and the love triangle i was so shock about the Ross scenes I'm most shock about what Ross did you rayne. it is sad to see them departing🥲 but it is very satisfying ending i hope nothing will happen bad to this vn i really like it crap everything about it i love the storyline characters you did a very good job at this vn if their more people working on this vn good job too do not try to tress yourself yes yes. a very very good visual novel very good chapters and characters  i hope it will get updates and love💖 the first visual novel that i love❤🫶

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What🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

I'm already blushing i haven't even download the update

woo ready to load

Enjoy! 👈👈

just a couple things i wanted to mention (no criticism or anything / cg spoiler ahead ig-):









[first thing]   was left a bit confused as to whether this was intentional or not TvT 

[second]     legit asked myself the same thing when i got to the end of the letter-



[third]    rayne lookin like he's about to lose his shit is hilarious for absolutely no reason-

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1. Oh firstly, no, that would be a bug. Sorry, I noticed it a couple moments ago so I manage to fix it.

2. Idk, that's up to you how you wanna interpret it 🤭

3. Yes, we all love an on-the-verge-of-snapping-someone's-neck rayne. Literally the best

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Ross look so fine

he doessssss, though i think i'm a bit more interested in Kitoa atm (☞゚ヮ゚)☞

Yaaa katio

I love Red Duolingo <3

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He do kindi look like Duolingo

i open the game and loaded some save files and this is what i saw 😨

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I'll check on this soon and should be fixed jn the next update (here's to hoping)

Out of curiosity how do I get CG of Rayne crying? Have I missed somehing or do I have to make bad choices?

I mean, the cg of rayne crying is just basically choosing the other option in the last choice menu (going home with Kitoa or Kim) I hope that helps! :]

Before you ask
Yes; I did change the name
Its not supposed to be rayne.

oli pants

Not again... 😰

Oh, thank you! I'll look into it 👍

Thank you for the feedback! <3

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Will there be any romance/routes in future updates?

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Well...I plan to put a couple of romance sequences. As you see, Rainbow tells the story about Rayne's new life in this new world. So, he's bound to be with someone at one point. Unfortunately, I can't say who yet. As for routes, I didn't plan any in this vn but like...in a way, the chapters in the vn is somewhat a route (cause each chapters kinda tells their name)

Good to know!

I hope the next chapter katio will still be there

What if this update's gonna be the time you'll see him teehee!

time will not be delayed it is for my showtime let out my scream let i wait till the update

Why Ross looking at fire and look like sad and depression 

Read the 'performance' menu and maybe you'll understand 🤭

I still dont get it 🥲

Well, first thing's first you need to know what the letter said, and then you'll need to replay and make the other choice so that Kitoa was accompanied by Ross. Then, you went to the performance menu and read the most recent line of "The Faithless Believer" You should be able to put two and two together now :D

thank u 😆

I literally have so much to say about the chapter that it will just fill the comments with me I love it it was amazing everything is amazing I'm very surprise about katio I love katio💘 I love this visual novel I'm excited for katio very heart melting I'm melting 🫠 AAAHHH im gonna go to a coma to much?

Aw, Thank you! You're really sweet! Although If I were you, maybe I'd go a bit chill in the comment section. I literally woke up and notiflications are exploding ✨ 👀

Maybe I should their are 7 comments with me

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Lmao Yes 😂

Now this just sad but did ollie really mean it when I love you💘

Yeah, he meant it 🙃

The music box give me chills

Kitoa seemed to like it

I'm screaming in silence because it's night time this making crazy AAAHHH I'm melting like rayne🫠

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Oops look's like someone  miss there lesson (spoiler)

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Omg katio this was such a surprise I would jump on him too this make me so much happy 😊😁🫶 (spoiler alert)

I have been waiting I'm so excited 🥳😄🤩

First time here. I'm not finish reading the VN but here my opinion about Rainbow VN


I know this VN using 1st person POV. However, for me it's kinda weird to see Rayne's name and sprite meanwhile the text is the narrations of the story.

The difference between the narrations of the story and the dialogue only on the quotation mark ( “.....” ). Rayne's name and sprite while the text is the narrations of the story makes Rayne looks like monologuing...


Other than that, this VN is promising.

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Yes, Rayne has three kinds of dialogue style:

1. When there's quotation mark (") and his sprite appears; He's saying it verbally

2. When there's no quotation mark but his sprite appears; It's a thought in his mind

3. When there's none of both; yeha, it's sort of like a narration that Rayne's doing (more like to give a better explaination without expressing his personality in the sentence)

I hope I help clear something up, and made your reading session more enjoyable :]

Like what I said before, it's kinda weird for me, when the Rayne's sprite appears meanwhile the text is story narrations (which mean Rayne's though).

Most of the 1st person POV VNs that I've read, not doing this.

Well, there are some VNs that never show their protagonist face, tho😅 so, your VNs aren't that odd.

Don't worry about that, it doesn't make my reading session less enjoyable.

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I want to comment my reactions about some parts of the storyline. But it means I'll give people some spoilers😅

I enjoyed your VN, and from the prologue, I know that you often read manga or watch anime that isekai genre 

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I enjoy reading your comment, it helped me learn a few things when it comes to VNs. Maybe I'll implement this in my next work. So, Thank you! <3

So much tension in the last part of first chapter. and it seems, I will get post-reading blues

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Why when people said ‘asian’it is often refer to Chinese and/or Japanese? Meanwhile, Asians are various...

Ah well. What Ollie's mother do is solely because what she went through in her life, nothing more. Each family is different and I can't judge everyone based on stereotypes.


Don't worry, you write it well!😄

Well, I chose to make it Japanese culture mainly because the region they're in is Evereast(Which is basically in the east), and the Japanese are a part of the east Asians based on Regional Groupings. I wouldn't know about every other but I purposely chose Japanese culture to present because as I said before plus...Their culture is pretty :>


Thanks for reading Rainbow! <3

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It seems, their artworks are really popular 😅

Shush!... Don't call me out like this lmao QwQ

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Hello😺

Hi 👋

KAS
Found a bug in the game

Its after you choose "go alone" in the grocery store

Im gonna post every time ive seen this error to here

Thank you so much! It's embarrassing but it does help quite a lot, so I appreciate it ✨😭👍

Rayne wants oli pants😳🤭

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Lmal Pls no🫠😭

Question is there going to be katio route

Idk we'll see 🙃

Yo I just got a Screen that said thanks for playing That was just a for now thing right? there will be more right?

Yes there will be more

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